 Laura Schiller 2009-11-08 . chapter 1In Greek mythology, Cupid/Eros does have a girlfriend. Her name is Psyche ("Soul") and she has to go through all sorts of crazy tests set up by his mother Aphrodite to prove herself worthy of him. It's an interesting story. You might look it up. |
 midday.dreams 2009-11-07 . chapter 1wow, this is so amazing! i've never even thought of this before...very, very creative! great word with the speech, too!
i like the two first lines of the second stanza best. :)
xoxo,
rrbow |
 SuzyJane 2009-08-12 . chapter 1wow this is amazing... and you made flow so wonderfully... kudos to you for writing poetry... I never could :) It's lovely :) |
 fleur de l'est 2009-08-05 . chapter 1Aw, sweet and sad. Kind of reminds me of people who are obsessed with setting other people up and never finding love themselves. |
 Sergeant Rock 2009-08-01 . chapter 1Yes, little cupida will come along and you will impale couples with arrows shaped like hearts together. Kidding. It was really good. I feel sorry for Cupid now. |
 kyox88 2009-08-01 . chapter 1a very creative idea indeed! love hw it rhyme! good job! |
 Tonett-B-Armijo 2009-07-29 . chapter 1Wow, this story is awesome. I greek mythology, poems like this often become my favorite! |
 Isca 2009-07-29 . chapter 1"You seem alone to me." I found this line so intriguing - why would Cupid be alone when he's in a relationship with Psyche? Perhaps his mother, Venus, is the speaker and realizes how hurt Cupid is when she insists that her son make Psyche fall in love with someone else.
"You are ever-faithful." Again, I found this line to be very interesting, as Cupid is the god of 'erotic love,' not 'true love.' It seems that Cupid 'goes against his nature' here if he's 'ever-faithful' to someone.
I like that you twisted this Greek Myth into something that was your own - keep up the good work. :) |
 sathepine 2009-07-28 . chapter 1This is quite inventive :) Poor poor Cupid tsk tsk |
 letyoursoultakeflight 2009-07-25 . chapter 1Aw, poor little guy... So many of your characters need me to give them a hug! *hugs them... twice* |
 Atomdancerr 2009-07-25 . chapter 1This is very good. Please please PLEASE pull it and repost it under the Cupid TV show. It will get many more readers and it is what we hope for him. And if you aren't familiar with the Cupid TV show It's at Youtube and the ABC site google ABC plus Cupid and fancastdotcom also has the new version which is also very good (more lighthearted) Fancast also sometimes as the new version and itunes sells it.
I never would have found your poem if I didn't have a google alert set to Cupid fanfic. What a tragedy if I'd missed it because its good! |
 Lady Livia 2009-07-24 . chapter 1*sob*
I think I'm gonna cry!!
Oh, poor thing! |
 Punslinger 2009-07-24 . chapter 1Very sweet and touching. Actually the Roman Cupid was derived from the Greek Eros, the physical embodiment of passion. And he did have a sweetheart - Psyche, the spiritual side of love. That's why you delicate gals make us lusty guys court you romantically. |
 Rockin-Ferrett 2009-07-24 . chapter 1...just wow. i read that with my jaw dropped, hehe. it was so beautiful to me and u were so right. cuz no one rly does think about him...so wut about santa?? =] |