haha! i liked it! lol its good to get away from all the love filled angst poems lol (nothing against those thoough, i love them, i write them myself lol) but yes i liked this alot...very descriptive and basically painted a picture in my mind ]

silent

I might change the line "The night is black as a raven’s plume" to "The night's as black as a raven's plume" to make it flow better - I say this only because this was one of my favourite lines from the piece and it deserves to be perfected. Excellent imagery here, by the way - the word 'plume' really makes this line 'pop.' :)