This has an excellent pace, and the kind of vividry that draws the reader in with all the simplicity that humanity has to offer. Very well written. MD:77.

So sweet and lovely!
I liked the a/n, at the end. Made me have an 'aw' moment. :)
Nicely done.

Lovely. There is always someone else we measure ourselves up to, you captured that perfectly 'like a flower, i've always been drawn to the light'. It is eerie somehow, with undertones of sadness, beautiful though, very beautiful.

lovely and flowing.
you portrayed the girl very well,
i had an image in my mind the instant
you mentioned "like a flower."
and i like the compare&contrast you do.
and then in the end, how
you bring us back to reality. fitting.