its was near perfect ..BUT there is a thing dat lacked d ending d words he say doesnt convince ME dat he loves HER dnt know ,,... !

Sorry, but the fact that your main character was an oncokogist really bugged me- not because of her job but because of her age. Oncologist's educational training is four years at an undergraduate institution, four years at an accredited medical school, about three years as an internal medicine resident and then about two more years in an oncology subspecialty residency. This gives a grand total of eight years in college and about five more as a resident before one is qualified to practice as an oncologist.

Also you confuse me with saying she met Dallas in college- if she and Vincent went to school together and Dallas and Vincent were friends in High School how could they not have met? Did she move after middle school?

Sweet.

Very cute, I loved it. Well done!

that was sweet :)

ohmygosh i cried. i cried a LOT. awesome awesome oneshot :)

1) When I read that Erica is begging and pouting, I think, "Poor Erica, she'll definitely soften Chase's heart."

2) Yeah, I agree that best friends can accept and understand each other's quirks, haha.

Oh my, this is... awesome. It is sad, it is touching, it is funny-ish. it is everything a story should be. Love it. Wedding stories like that are always the best.

I kinda wish we had actually seen the romance develop (and maybe seen those missed moments), but this was incredibly sweet, and I'm very glad artistic dreamer added this to our c2. (:

cute.. i hope he's sincere...

i liked the story and the fact that the heroine wasnt over emotional and melodramatic

charlotte

This is the CUTEST story ever! MAKE MORE! !YOU ROCK!

Dang. I got all excited because I thought there was another chapter and it wasn't. If this us a one-shot, I love it. If it isn't, update soon.

very, very sweet(:

loved the buildup, and Vincent and Chase (and her name!)

now i have no idea who to vote for. :'(

Adorable :)

-Aria