I really loved the first two stanzas. The contradictions worked beautifully and the word choices were so powerful and wonderful. However, the last stanza didn't seem as good because to "softly beautiful" is a normal phrase. It's not a contradiction or anything like this. Still other than that line this piece was relaly amazing.

PS If you're bored check out the Review Game and/or its Review Marathon (links in my profile).

Sounds kinky. xD

Is it love if it's that painful or dangerous?