Hey sweetie! i really like this, i really do! but i was hoping we'd find out what really went on between aaron and jules.. especially from aaron's point of view.. other then that.. awesomeness!

Isn't it stacatto? not statacco? i dont know..XD

but i like the story though.. even though, yes, i dont think it stuck to the rules..XD
as a oneshot, i like it.. :]

*claps* very nice

Despite your uncertainty about the piece I thought it had a certain charm. I liked both of the characters: Aaron was perhaps a little hard to understand in his motives, but you can't give away too much without ruining the story.
A quick word misuse I noticed:
"...a heart, a soul, an actual conscious…or at least I thought you had one."
Conscious should, in fact, be conscience in this context. An easy mistake to make when attempting to get down fast flowing thoughts, I just thought I'd give you a heads up :)
Still, a nice read, and I enjoyed it!

Ooh, definitely a fun read, especially the opening. An open grave on Halloween?? Ouch, the irony … and I like that Aaron didn't start off as chivalrous right off the bat, waiting to bait her before he tries helping her out. The part where he was biting back on the chivalry with his sprain was such an aww-moment.

But otherwise, that's not really a solid reason to fall in love with a person. Like and respect them after ages of enmity, definitely, but love? Too rushed, too fast. His breaking into her house with out-of-nowhere lock-picking skills was rather forced, as well, like the long romantic speech in the end, because I was left wondering where-did-all-that-come-from??

Including a bit more Juliette-Aaron interaction would have been good, instead of stuffing it entirely into the beginning and the end, which were overdeveloped if compared to the sketchy middle. But for an "I-love-to-hate-you" relationship, wow, she had a SOLID reason for hating him, and wow, he never does explain himself, does he?

This was really good as well although it ended rather rapidly..wished Aaron would explain himself =] But i still really like your stories!

I actually truly liked this, and the only part I didn't like all that much was the end (I would think she was still somewhat indignant at him and would not eagerly launch into a makeout session, but I suppose I may be wrong). Still, I did really love this (and think it was a pretty damn good oneshot), though I would like to point out you used "cubical" instead of "cubicle" at one point. But other than that, props to artistic dreamer for adding this to our c2. (:

sorry babe
this was really well written
but i wanted to beat the ** out of the main character.
Aaron is such a ** **.
He used her in high school.
and she forgives him because of one "I'm sorry" and no further explination is needed.
and then he lead her on again.
She seems like a weak willed loser.
really sorry.
but i hated both characters.
But VERY well written
:)

Oh, no!! You don't need to rewrite this-or at least, that's what I think...It's good, really..

I thought this story was actually pretty good!
I love your other stories as well, although I haven't reviewed them since it was before I had an account, so think of this as a review on ALL your stories :)

Catchy summary. Really liked the hate you had going on, Juliette had a good reason to dislike Aaron unlike in most stories. I wish Aaron had to explain his actions in past and present to her though before Juliette jumped him. It seems like he got off to easy, even if the story is a romance oneshot with word constraints.

aw, cute!
^^
how do you create the best guys anyway?
but they're all awesome, so i'll be stealing one soon enough :P
just kidding.
but now i want my own love story(:
i guess all girls do.

This was totally cute!
I want to know why Aaron did those things in high school though. He doesn't even apologize. I think the ending could be better. Maybe you could add a confession from him after hers. It could giver some closure to that whole incident and let her completely move on with him.
Dunno. Just throwing an idea out. It was still very good! One of my favorites. (Falling into a grave. I don't htink I could get over that. That's was hilarious.)

Well, you may not be 100% happy with this but I sure am! I totally loved it!
I liked Aaron's comebacks and of course, I loved the ending too!
Great work.

Good luck to you my swet ;)
I liked it, and he was pretty awesome. Although I'd like some insight to why he actually acted that way towards them previously! That was a totally **-ish thing to do.
But yet; I like it. Nice work Aria!!