|Reviews for Discourse on Teddy Bears|
| persimmon 8/20/09 . chapter 1
Very, very cute.
| runaway sheet 8/17/09 . chapter 1
Aww, Jack is such a doll, telling Anthony about his Spiderman fetish as a kid just to make him feel comfortable.
'I could be your teddy bear instead?' Wow, that guy really IS full of bad pick-up lines. High Schoolers. Heh, not to diss any high schoolers Noo no no, I just think Jack trying so hard is really cute.
Such an adorable ending. Your sense of humor has matured which is good as the alternate would be that you haven't changed in 2 years. I really miss our little Pricess Edana though, Damar the lamb rocks. And you do too. Rock on!
Oh, and just give us more stories- one shots or otherwise. Keep writing hun.
| primrose path 8/12/09 . chapter 1
Very humorous. Demonic-eyed teddy bears (I want one!), teddy bears held hostage, arguments about the superior superhero... Hehehe. You've convinced me that there is an art to finding a proper soft toy for a sleeping partner. They have to have the right shape and be just so.
I only managed to pick up one small typo. That is, you have "build" instead of "built" in the line "He was large, a little more solidly build...". Normally I wouldn't point out this kind of thing, but this was written so well that I feel compelled to do so.
Good job. This was so cute and funny. Just what I needed.
| frogs of war 8/10/09 . chapter 1
That was so cute. I snickered most of the way through it. Luckily the room is noisy so no one else noticed.
| kazoua 8/10/09 . chapter 1
Aw. This was cute, really cute. But kinda almost suggestively sexy? Maybe?
| Sarashina 7/30/09 . chapter 1
Oh man, I really liked this - the pairing is adorable, and their banter made me giggle so much. Anthony's snark is really amusing, and I love Jack in general. Poor gigantic, buff 17-year-old.
Also, until you tell me otherwise I am going to assume that the line about redheads was totally thought up with me in mind. You know it.
Great to read something new from you, darling!
| Amindaya 7/28/09 . chapter 1
I just thought I should mention that there is an advertisement for Vermont Teddy Bears at the bottom of the page.
And this story was wonderfully cute. Above all, I loved that the interaction was so natural. The concept was original, too. And the way he actually got on the floor to test them out!
| Insomiak 7/27/09 . chapter 1
...How the fuck did you COME UP WITH THAT? That amazed the shit right out of me! Fuck you! I nearly died! Their entire conversation was just fucking perfect. I kept saying "Oh my god" over and over again like a wasted prat. I'm especially happy that you didn't name it "I Could Be Your Teddy Bear." Haha, wouldn't that have been cheeky? No, seriously. Now every time I'm in a toy isle I'm going to giggle. Like a fool.
And your writing is just lovely. It flowed so well I didn't look away once or think "well that line sucked" or "what a lame simile." I can't even think of anything bad to say about it. I’m even tempted to say the usually “aw that was so cuttee!” but it wasn’t just “cute,” it was at the very least realistic, because the seventeen-year-old-Jack-fella was just so horrible at words like most seventeen-year-olds, and, oh, I don’t know. They carried two conversations at once. Pretty sure if you can do that you’re in love.
Kay, I’ll shut the hell up now.
| RedBird13 7/27/09 . chapter 1
Omg, that was just hilarious! xD
I really liked it, I wish you would do a sequel or something, it would be nice
| Chibko 7/26/09 . chapter 1
Aw, nothing wrong with teddy bears! XD
That was so cute and awkard! :D
| mechante fille 7/26/09 . chapter 1
Cute! Loved Anthony needing stuffies and Jacks awkward pick-up skills. _
Also, hello you! Always wonderful to see evidence of your continued existence, and of course your writing. Good luck with the SKoW awards. And with the coming school year. _
| Jixnce 7/26/09 . chapter 1
Aww, I wish this wasn't a one-shot! I loved this fic.
| ddz008 7/26/09 . chapter 1
Great one-shot! I was nice to read something written by you. And it was so cute... Jack was so funny with his weird pick-up lines XD I really liked it.
| zoule 7/26/09 . chapter 1
This definitely wasn't what I was expecting, but it's cute nonetheless. (I totally understand Jack's fixation on stuffed animals - for the exact same reasons _)
| Mage Dudette 7/26/09 . chapter 1
Totally. Adorable. _