it's a really good story. I like the way yo describe everything with such detail and emotion. but one question is each chapter changing point of view from the guy and girl??

who did he go with?? I'm a little confused

Aw, sad :( I really think this is an interesting story. I'm looking forward to updates!

Aw, I love the letter. So sweet, but so heartbreaking at the moment! And I really love this line for some reason: "Permanent tracks down my cheeks" I'm not even sure why, but for some reason, it just strikes me.

Again, how sad! Aww... I really like how you switch perspectives with every chapter. Its interesting to be able to see both views.

Aw, how sad :( I like how, when she drops the phone, she can still hear his voice, and she thinks he's crying. It's almost sweet, in an odd way (if that makes sense XD)

Aw, how sweet! I like how we aren't sure if she heard him or not- it sort of makes me wonder if maybe she did and she still remembers, or if she never did at all.

Very nice! I like this chapter. It's short and sweet, and yet it still holds my attention

Great beginning! I think that this will turn out to be an amazing story, just from the looks of it. It's well written, and you leave a lot of room to be able to shape it later on. It's got a lot of potential. I can't wait to read more!