This story could be a real hooker if you kept writing it.
Ahm... maybe a chapter developing how Snoop + female lead met each other, and then a chapter developing the afterwards to the arrest? Summat like that. Have fun, and thanks for the read.

LOL
omg i love this long time
the language they use is hilarious and entertaining
:D
WELL DONE!
keep it up ^_^

okay this was a good story i liked it and it made me laugh, alot. on the other hand i think you could have elaberated more at the end it jumped from you giving him a quick kiss to you spending your spring break fund. so theres really no leading into how you ended up spending your personal fund in detail. as in theres no parents saying your paying for this on your own type of thing.
but again verry funny. keep writting :)

Wow, this is really good. The ending was a little flawed but only because it was compared to this great epic chapter filled with amazing character development a well as humorous description. Try to keep it up to the end. I really love this and definitely favoriting. :]

haha that was good! the humor is strange but it just seems to fit with the narrator's character. and Snoop is weird, but that makes sense too

overall, very cute and different; if you do continue this, i hope it gets even more interesting :)

i laughed nearly the whole time i was reading this. it's cute, i wish i was good at writing humor, but i fail at it every time. good job, i really love it. (: