i ADORE IT!

So I just read through this entire story and I have to say that I...LOVED IT! I don't know why I hadn't discovered it before since I read YBWM. But I'm happy I did! By the way...Forrest is the curtest little boy in the entire planet! ^_^
Going to read the rest of the Masterson stories! :)

-Liz :D

I think this is the best chapter I read so far ;)

I love Forrest, he's such a darling XD

-last comment, you might get annoyed because I leave so many reviews-

Lol, so sorry! :))

woh! it's getitng hot in here :)) (in a clean way -.-)

All Over You, you're such a great author!

Whoa. This just blew me away! awesome! I get a bit of a background of Fallon, Perry, and River. Mwahehehe.

I just feel it's unfair River's the one who has to give in so often. Like with the first ILY, her kissing another guy, and then forgiving her just like that. It's just unfair. The guy shouldn't always be the one to give in. Just a bit unrealistic in that part for me. Also, for some weird reason, I want Fallon to hurt. Bad. Then they can get back together.

Okay, I just have to say, thank you for giving Fallon's dark past actual darkness and not being cliche like some boy broke her heart. So often "dark pasts" are overly contrived, while this was very genuine.

Also, I think it's wonderful when female characters have sex without guilt of being "that whore." Too often writers sell out female characters and make them the ones who get played. Or subconsciously make it seem okay for guys to screw around while the girl sits at home. Good for you that you've evened the playing field.

(P.S. Good luck with self-publishing!)

It's a rare find to get such a sharp-tongued and even sharper witted teenaged cast of characters. The dialog is some of the best I've seen around the site, and the characters keep you on your toes. I also love that you didn't write Fallon as a idealistic girl waiting for prince charming.

The only thing I would suggest is that you should have kept the entire story in third person. First person is far more limiting than third, and if you were going to pursue publishing these stories (which you should consider!), then you would have to put it all into third person for consistency.

Great work!!

That was heartwrenching when he got rejected and I had a feeling that river would say it first. I didn't think fallon would be in love with him at the same time though. Great story.

what was the thing she did..

I just began reading this story, and so far (first chapter) River and Fallon have such undeniable chemistry!
I can't wait to see what happens in the next chapters, and ultimately, the ending.

Oh God, I love it. Seriously. One of the best stories I've ever read here in FP. Nice job! ;)

Yay! I'm up to date now with the Masterson series. I really liked this one. I liked the whole plot line with the bet and everything. It was very unique. I think this one is my favorite, but True is definately the sweetest, with the art project love thing. I absolutely love Forrest. I can't wait to read his story. How far in the future does it take place? Did you say that you were doing a Fallon/River one-shot before you start on Forrest's story? Jeez, I get so off topic, talking about all the other stories in my reviews. Sorry. ;) Can't wait to read something new!

oh
i im starting to love this story.
fallon and river sound interesting.

that was cute i loved it amazing story