There’s a lot of strong images and metaphors in this. I loved ‘lemony light’ and ‘the cobwebs of his soul.’ I feel like all of the aspects of this poem came together really well, and each verse really added a strong note to the overall meaning. Having said that though, I do feel like this one is a bit unfinished. It seemed like more could be said about these two. Keep up the good work.

Much love,
Juliet.

Jules, via the Review Marathon (links in my profile)

Oh, there's a darker tone to this that I like a lot.

I love this.

It reminds me of a Bukowski with a heart.