The song is so beautiful

This is so well written. I love it so far.

it was great...

the ending was great!

Wow! I hated Ava for a while, for what he did to Lee... but then again, I think I understood him as well.

Just.. wow. I cried so much, i'm not sure what I think about the ending though. It's so sad he lost his daughter, but now he's lost Lee as well, even though it's really Ophelia, but you catch by drift right? Anyways.. just ignore my rambling :P I love the story!

I just felt that the end was a bit rushed, but maybe it was like that to improve the story. so.. anyways good job on writing this!

AH! THE ENDING KILLED ME.

I love you.

The summary and the idea were really appealing. I couldn't keep up with this story for too long, but it was really a slice-of-life cutesy fluff story, but if you look closer you see the angst.

This is a really great story, it just went on.

I cried.

So much.

Good job, my friend.