I like the line "meaningless imprints"
and the last stanza and how you spaced out apart. Very effective :)
Great job!

LOVE what you did with the bolding and italicizing.
Every line fits really nicely with the next, and I really like the general idea. :D

Excellent work!

rolliepollie44

I haven't seen my girlfriend in a week either...
the summer is a curse for lovers without
transportation.

O.O u has a boyfriend?
I name him "fluffy".