I like it! ^^ It's more psychological horror than anything else, I think, but I really like it. Keep up the good work!

Hey,
That was really intense. We can feel the character's desperation. Pointer:
The breeze wiggles...
Umm. I've never seen/heard breeze being decsribed as wiggling :p Maybe another word would've worked better? Also:
...It's is guilt to bear...
I think you meant to write 'his' :P
anyways, well done!
ranDUMM

Great entry. Well written and great choice of words.