That's such a sad and touching poem :') I love the way it was said, it was poetic and lovely 3

Aww that is so sad :(

Like it btw!

you could really feel how the speaker in the poem really feels. his/her sadness gets to you and you can't help but feel the same. nice job :)

Aww is right!

This is sad, but oh so sweet all the same.

I especially like the questions in this poem,

"How could I go on? How could I survive?"

Nice work with this!

It seems really proofread. Which is good. My pieces tend to be crappy and unedited. LOL! Anyhow... I had a favourite line... But I cant remember which one it was, sorry. Great piece of writing.

Well written, if there's a fitting music around you can sing along with it.

Well done.

The rhyme scheme you used for this poem was very moving, especially the lines:

"How could I go on? How could I survive?

My heart had been ripped, trampled and torn."

- These lines make the emotions in this poem relatible. It's such strong emotion and it speaks of something that everyone experiences, heart break.

Kudos on a wonderful poem

"Rich in love but otherwise poor"

I like that line. :)

Hey,

Aw *cries* Really sad :( Really well written, no criticism :)

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