Only two words for this "Sydni", and those are MARY SUE.
All the guys are gorgeous. How realistic is that?
If this girl is so smart and interesting and perfect (mary sue mary sue mary sue), where is her personality, and faults, and creative vocabulary, and any other human traits?
How reasonable is it that every single male is automatically smitten with her, despite how attractive you make her ou to be? Where is the hook? Where is the conflict? Where is teh originality?!
Sorry,and don't be like one of those idiots and take it personal, but you've got a lot to learn. Nice try.

so this is just a dream ? (2 bad)
i really thought princess was getting loose.

oh i feel a shark & princess relationship coming on!

I'm happy u updated

does this mean u'll update soon

lol, i'm rooting 4 princess!

What happens next in the games? I want to know!

why do most of the guys in your character description have at the "loves girls a lot ?" you need to make at least two of them gay! Like sydni walks into the bathroom and skittles and i dont know... snicker bar or hershey are making out !and i liked this chapter though i hope the only drama wont just be she likes one guy and a guy likes her and they fight over her . you need to put some DRAMA in here !! like she a dude and he likes skittles and She and Skittles fight over him ! ~ is this the longest review ever or what !!

oh my god. AWESOME! haha. Love it. So cute!

I love princess !

Haha, Shark is counting down the days until she turns legal XD excellent teehee. funny but boy did Princess cut down the ho it was like complete destruction. almost too harsh XD can't wait for an update :)

I love it. Cept I wish she totally kicked shark's **. I really want her to show up some big guy or something! Plz update really soon!

she's a little too perfect, lol, but still cool. so yeah, good story :) update soon please

I think that this story sounds good. I hope you continue it!

plz keep writing ! i thought it was amazing & u write really well ! ( so do u look ANYTHING like sydni ? guz if u do ur really brave !)