good descriptions. personal fav: your smile is beautiful poetry. i had a problem with your word choice of irises though, it just seemed really strange. i also liked the last lines, powerful and poetic.
remember: review marathon!
~fatbird:)

Once again, beautiful.

"And when it rains I can feel my bones." Wow - I love this line! I feel the same 'ache' as the speaker does when it rains - that's a good way of describing the sensation.

I really like this, Natalie.
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I love this, Natalie.
this is beautiful D:

Wow. Very deep, very beautiful.