 Little girl Big world 2009-10-14 . chapter 1There can be so many meanings to this, its amazing.
Wonderfully written. This made me think |
 Princess-anna57 2009-09-22 . chapter 1You pretty much summed up exactly how I feel right now, I have to applaud you *clap clap clap* Thank you so much.
~Anna~ ^_^ |
 in theory 2009-08-22 . chapter 1Every time I think I've pinned down the meaning, it wriggles off. I really enjoyed it, am still enjoying it, bordering on being irritated with myself, but excellent work! |
 Faithless Juliet 2009-07-31 . chapter 1hm... You're haiku is very strong; it makes me think of the idea of reflection...
To see yourself in/through another person makes me think that these two are really one in the same, though different, or perhapse one person is so transparent (emotionally?) that the person doing the seeing can see themselves through them.
It made me think of a few things, honestly, I really liked it, I can tell I'm going to be thinking about this one for a while. ;)
Much love,
Juliet. |
 Isca 2009-07-30 . chapter 1This is one of those pieces that you have to read a few times before the meaning really sinks in - and then KABOOM it's profound and leaves you breathless. I like the contrast between the title and the topic of the poem. Perhaps this love is a 'reflection,' or the love is one-sided, or the speaker is really looking into her own eyes... |
 Ygg 2009-07-28 . chapter 1Ohh intriguing question! It takes quite some reflection and self-criticism to take back the projections one has put on other people, and to acknowledge one's own imperfection. The flower can only be unique through her little imperfections. I guess that's what ultimately make us human.. Excellent Haiku! |
 LazyCatfish27 2009-07-27 . chapter 1I have no presence
I only exist in this world
To be your mirror |
 boys kiss girls 2009-07-27 . chapter 1I love that the title both contradicts and encourages the actual haiku. I also love that this haiku, at first glance, is quite simple. But you read through it two more times and it hits you that this is an entirely new concept. It could be a reflection of love, but I'm getting a darker meaning from it. I also like how open ended it is, so anyone could truly interpret it the way they want. Kudos :) |