Everyone makes mistakes in love and they can't be controlled, unfortunately. I have no idea what I would do in your situation, but I think you did the right thing by refusing to wait. It's emotional, but I like the way you wrote it )

This is amazing. Very well written.

And I like the concluding question, really makes you meditate on the piece.

I really like this piece, probably because it really reminds me of a person I really cared about a while ago. It's exactly how I saw it, too. I like how I can relate to it :). I think it's really well written, and really thoughtful. Great job.