|Reviews for A Paricular Brand of Mercy|
| tonight we bloom 8/16/09 . chapter 1
this is absolutely stunning. you have great description and great diction too, might i add. this is a very powerful piece, thank you for sharing : )
i would love opinions from a writer like yourself on my work, it would mean a lot to me!
| Amaury 7/28/09 . chapter 1
| Isca 7/28/09 . chapter 1
"Mangled mind." Nice 'm' alliteration.
"Scream." I like that the word 'scream' follows the word 'midnight' - as if the darkness itself (or in this case, 'the witching hour') is frightening.
"Greet the let-down of dawn." Excellent line. It's powerful to think that the Dawn has the ability to affect our emotions - as if it can break our trust - good use of personification too.
"Walk into the tide. Keep going." Oh God. This part is breath-taking. The death imagery here is so moving and sorrowful. Great work, MC. :)