great title. it goes with the poem and it's unique and catchy. i really liked your descriptions and the girl's imagination with the wind. pretty for sure. the only line i had a problem with was the "warmwarmwarm". it didn't really go with the rest of the poem and didn't create an effect with the words together.
but i really enjoyed it.
by the way, the books you're currently reading are both fantastic!!
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~fatbird:)

woah, this is really good writing. the first stanza was absolutely beautiful, it took my breath away. the image of comparing the wind to his tongue is so great.

and the bit about his voice is exceptional, too.

i loved this. thank you for this brilliant morning read.


i would love opinions from a writer like you on my work, it would mean a lot.

Wow. I really liked this piece. The 'white horses' and 'subway' parts were my favourite - the imagery there is divine! What a creative romantic poem. :D

This was really good. Sweet, yet melancholy. The last two lines are probably my favorites. :) Nice job!

I have no words to express how much I absolutely adore this.

Just, really.

Love the imagery of the subway lights coupled with the line, "...and pretend we're in a magical kingdom." Very imaginative. The fact that her fantasy of his presence lasts only a minute leaves the reader forlorn and wanting at the end. Sad, but good.

-Ramen