 Ramenluver 2009-07-29 . chapter 1"‘perspective,’."
You can omit the comma.
"So you smile at him, but you don’t say anything, you understand that he thinks differently than you, but you’re still angry all the same."
The first comma should be a semicolon.
I particularly love this piece because I am an artist, and I can relate. :) The ending line was a knock-out, and made me giggle.
Nicely done,
-Ramen |