I think that this is really good! You have a few grammar mistakes but it doesn't take me out of the story or anything! Please keep writing! I wanna know what happens to Andi!!

You got skillz.

First off i have to say this is a very good story i enjoyed reading the first 2 chapters and can't wait for more! And your right for us small town kids we know what a Geo and Yugo is :) hope you keep writing!