Such a good poem. ;

Very good, I love the repitition here.

Keep it up, nice job.

loved it! a real girl's prospective of first love..

Okay, first of all, I liked the concept of your poem. I also liked how throughtout the poem you had a question that kept repeating. However, I thought that sometimes the rhyming seemed forced and strained. Sometimes rhyming dictionaries are good tools to use and sometimes not. Overall, I enjoyed reading your poem it was a perfect length. Thanks for sharing. :)