Must have taken you a bit to write smutless, yes?
I mean, I have written a bit of smut and can't say I would be able to write smutless.
You pulled it off magnificently though!

The quiet reference to Randall from The Mouse Trap trilogy was touching.
Whole story was touching really!

LOVE THIS SO MUCH OH MI GOSH! You paint the characters so well! I just want to sit back and watch their stories unfold... and you always finish so beautifully *-* Thankyou!

Aww, that was really cute. Although I'm not going to lie, I was bummed about the no smut. That was a great story!

Damn, thats sad. I live in a hick town, kinda like that truth be told. But hey at least Zachary has a friend

This is a really cute story. I feel really bad for poor Zachary

LMAo, he decked him!

Wow, he dosen't seem very nice. This sounds really intresting

I’m such a big fan of your writing, of the way you paint the story, bring it to life before your readers eyes, but you already know that. And as much as I feel flattered that you are mentioning me in the author note, I don’t feel like I deserve it. I had nothing to do with the greatness of your work (with this and the previous story) you did everything on your own.

And this deserves more reviews and fanning. All of your story do.

I loved it!! It was so cute, but still had serious issues in it. And Andy is just to gorgeous! He's awesome. I love how he says 'son'.

omgosh this requires more reviews and a sequel!

im not gonna lie, after the first chapter, i put on the doobie brothers to set the mood. ahhaha.