Hey,

This was a really great poem! It was so deep and meaningful :) The second stanza; is it meant to be 7-5-7? :) Great work!

ranDUMM

Aw, wow. That was great. I loved how you did three verses, because you had so much to say; and each verse held as much power as a single haiku. It was deep, and I loved the hints of symbolism, or what I took as that at least. Its bittersweet. Simply enough, I liked it. :)

Hey! It's me, Mandii! I will always love your writings no matter what. I love it! I feel so sad for her. :( Poor guy broke her heart. Ah, last gift that she gave him was a tear. A sad tear. :

heartfelt, I like the verse 1