|Reviews for Death of a PM|
| Carus 8/3/09 . chapter 1
I like this poem. It's definitely topical and I agree with most of what you say in it.
I think the style that you've chosen to write it in works well as it helps to reflect the views of the "common people". My favourite stanza's the last, as it sums the rest of the poem up well while also making an impact on the reader with it's shorter sentences and the dramatic last line.
I love the word "sheeple". :P Very clever.
At times the rhyme and rhythm were a bit off, but to an extent that adds to the overall feel of the piece - that it's from the point of view of a representative of the average Briton.
I hope you do upload a companion piece. Cos I wanna read it. :D
| Isca 8/1/09 . chapter 1
"And we’re still reelin’ from that last shit you was sewin.’" LOL. This line is so comedic - it's awesome. I like that you mixed politics with rap - cool!
| ArekuKawaii 7/31/09 . chapter 1
I love the rap style you put in this poem because it is highly amusing and kept me entertained. This is the most unique thing I have read on this site I think.
Sheeple? my only comment to that is lol. (I really hate putting 'lol' in a review but that is the only thing to explain that.)
The flow is very nice in this poem which would have been more hard to do I think. But, it just flowed together and sounded nice and put together.
Overall good job. It was interesting and kept me amused.
| deefective 7/30/09 . chapter 1
Haha, didn't know you had it in you. I loved this. It had that rap-ish style to it and of course, it reminded me of Immortal Technique. Loved the line about being Great and not sheeple. One part of my brain picked up on it but the other was thinikng "...that's not a word". Haha, nicely written lyrics/verses/whatever. Some lines felt a bit forced into the rhyme scheme and others were kind of off with the beat, but overall nicely done.