To be honest, the summary looked sort of amateur so I didn't want to read it - but this was written pretty well!

I like this story, it's very interesting. Although, you have a few spelling mistakes.

"Know one" should be "no one" in a few spots in the story. I like the name choice for Aric though, very original. Keep it up, although I must say the ending was fairly unexpected, saddening though.

Hey!!

WOW, I am loving the style and the setting here. Everything is so dreamy and the images in the woodland are so beautiful, plus Aric sounds like a hottie, hehe. His description just made me gasp!

A few errors:

Know [No] one ever came here, this is my own sanctuary.

I whimpered as he pulled harder, the branch bending as ha [he] drew me closer to the water.

Also, there needs to be some extra commas here and there, but other than that, good job!

Update!!

~ Sakina x

ok sajila that was a goos chap!1 but i was hoping if i could help advise on some of the parts of the chapter!

I somehow like Aric... >

oh interesting very interesting. i should like to read more if you woul d =kindly update.
thank you
Duke

Awesome story so far! Can't wait for you to update!

~Raven

Thats sad, why did her mother have to die when she just got home and had seen Aric?

i like the story so far, i hope you keep going with this! :)

I want to know what happens later so could you please hurry? :D lol

Oh my gosh!

It's ironic that her mother past away AFTER she was bonded for eternity with a strange male person...

It's stupid that he is so rough with her though. he could be gentlier.

:P I hate it when guys do that.

UPDATE ASAP!

~Mo~

Oh, I am intrigued...please update!! :)

~ Sakina x

Very interesting... hope you'll update soon!

What a compelling introduction. I liked it a lot. It was creative, descriptive, and it makes me wonder what will happen. Continue :)