Brother and Sister was one of my favorite fairy tales growing up (I guess that sounds a little bizarre, compared to prettier ones like Cinderella) so I was really excited to see a story based on it. I liked your take a lot! I did find one inconsistency, at the beginning you say that by the time Daisy was 14 she could cook anything but at the end they are barely 13. This isn't necessarily a problem, but I thought it was a little confusing. I hope you update soon!