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BurningTheHorizon 2009-09-29 . chapter 1
so... it seems that the girl portrayed is you, and maybe the guy is your sub-conscious? not really sure, but it kinda feels like she's struggling with something, and her "figment" is her way of either dealing, coping, or her way of figuring out the relevant question. his lack of concern makes me think disconnection, so like a darker or opposite half of her being, a separate perspective... not sure if i got my point across, but i liked it. its kinda rough, but good nonetheless. seems... unfinished...
Hanzao 2009-09-02 . chapter 1
Hmm... a sweet bit of madness there. I like it!
Zenten 2009-07-31 . chapter 1
I love how it plays out.
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