What!
What what what what what.
It's ended? Why? Why has it ended?
I'm absolutely dying to know what happens to Nate and Kieran.
What happened at the wedding? Did Nate do something while he was drunk?
And will Jason and Nate make up?
And will you update!?
D:

Favourite character? I'd have to say Nate! I am totally curious as to what he cannot remember, and I want to see what he'll think of Kieren afterwards!

I like Kieran the best, or Nate. I like them both for different reasons, with Nate being that it's like the story is through his eyes, even though it is in third person, you feel the most connected to him. Kieran's character is mysterious and freaky, and really, what else does he need to be awesome? Except some disgusting fetish...just kidding, haha. Necrophilia or whatever really isn't cool. But I love the plot line with the wedding and what happened there, so I can't wait to find out more about that. I have a friend that is like Stephenie, and she sounds just like him so I obviously hate him...joke. I think she's an easily relatable character. Jason, he sounds so real to what happens in life a lot, with dropping your friends because of a girlfriend or boyfriend and all. Plot and characters are amazing. Update when you can.

Please continue writing this story!
It's so addictive, I constantly want to know what's going to happen next!

I don't understand the story. Can I be frank like that? Yeah. I don't understand the story at all.

But I like the suggestiveness. hehe. I'm a perv. Sorry.

ha. hes a bit crepy.
uhoh. missing memories. not a good sign...

alright. you got me interested. that kieran is totally putting off a 'twilight''edward cullen' vibe! lol...

When Nate chocked he should've choked and you spelled 'how' as 'hot' near the end, but this chapter was great besides those minor mistakes. I love Nate and Kieran together. This story idea was great.

Why *did* he single Nate out? I liked this first chapter. It was extremely entertaining, and I liked the fact that Nate didn't completely melt for Kieran.

I think it's good that were getting to know your characters a little bit more. The fact that Nate is drifting away from his best friend just makes him more relateable. Also, the way that Nate gets angry in this chapter is also very effective in reveling character. Good story so far, I've definitely enjoyed reading it :)

The ending of this chapter was very effective, almost like a traditional cliffhanger. Though, it did get a little bit confusing when Jason, Nate, Stephenie, Winter, her friends and Kieran were all the room at the same time. Even so, I am able to seperate your characters in my mind though physical description, so I'm not always wondering 'who is this again?'

Hmm...well based on this one chapter, I'm enjoying your story so far. My favorite was your description of Kieran. I also liked Nate's reaction to Kieran's comment--it was very realistic and the little bit at the end made me go WTH, but in a good way. The kind that makes me want to keep reading.

I'm playing the review game after a long, long time...so I hope I don't mess up...

Okay, here goes:

I liked the way you invoked your characters...seemed very realistic. I like your writing style - it feels as though I'm watching the characters act the part than see it written. If you know what I mean.

The first half of the story was very well written. But the second half seemed to move a bit fast. You should consider slowing things down a little.

Otherwise, it's a good piece of work!

Keep writing.

aw.. he's loonely.

I like this story.
It seemed a little cliche at first, but then again, a lot of good stories are cliche. It's the way the cliche is done that makes the story good.
I'd like to see some more out of Kieran... he seems almost stereotypical? It's like he needs some sort of quirk, something that the reader wouldn't expect, like, almost 'out of character' for his 'stereotype'... if that makes any sense. It's like he's too good to be true, almost. He needs to seem more human to me.
I like Nate, regardless of the fact that my main original character's name is also Nate, though they're completely different, but his normalcy is really well-written. It's not boring, but it's portrayed well.
Stephanie is a character I like and can relate to. I can picture her organization and how she acts, and it's the same with Jason.
Getting some more outta Winter would be cool; what exactly does Stephanie despise so much about her?
Giving the not necessarily key characters some more depth is a good thing as long as you don't get too involved with them.
I like the idea of the wedding, and I'm quite curious. You could take it in many directions and I want to see what you decide to do.
Other than the few typos that I can dismiss, your story is very well-done. I think the chapter length is perfect where it is, to be quite honesty. I look forward to your updates. C: