Hey, got the SKOW email and extremely glad that I chose to check this story out. Wow is all I can really say. You write extremely well, and have me already eagerly awaiting more.

I like the premise of this story, and your voice. The story itself and its characters are somewhat original, and extremely intriguing (I like to be intrigued when reading). For most part your writing was flawless, I only noticed two typos (you had her when you meant here early on in the chapter and in this line "Her eyes we’re glassy, nor hands shaking," I assume you mean weren't not we're.)I hope you update soon, I really like this story. Great job, awesome chapter.

haha this is cute and humourous. Looks promising.

Oh I love Bad Things! Do you watch true blood? It's my favorite. I really likeed this. "Quick as a whip, I snapped" I especially liked that. I'm very curious about Keira. She seems to only think she's a human, but thats definitely not true. And these boys. Jace sound hot!

Nice! & what else is this girl mixed with? I gotta read more!

Yeah, so...did you forget to post the prologue?

If so, I think I deserve a really awesome present when you get back from London, Amanda. Seriously!

And if you didn't post it on purpose, why!? I really loved the prologue.