really good story! can't wait to see what'll happen next,
keep it up :)

r u ever going to update?!

Hi, I've read some of your other stories as well, and I really like them all. Can't wait to read more!
Later

e! This story makes me so hyper sometimes, I just jump around me room going "this is so convenient it would never happen but I totally know that they're going to fall in love and it's just so cute even though it wouldn't be in real life!!"
I'm a weird kid...but it's so good!

this is pretty nice..i can't wait for the next chapter..

I love it!!
Keep going!!
It's really good!!

oh yay, they're getting on well. he took it ok, that's good. can't wait for more ~ Alenor

ok i just wrote ten secondes ago but i love your story!

this is what could have happened if my mother and father had gotten to know eachother! please update soon!

I think i've fell for Seth hes such a nice person.

my god this hits home... i found out i was pregnant about a month ago...keep updating

aw. so cute. i do hope everything works out! update soon.

OH my hee haw i love the story!

i love it...
awe..
and seth is so...
awe:))

Sigh. Amazing writing as always. I thought their interaction went really well. I'm glad that Seth wants take part in her pregnancy. And I just love how you wrote Jessie.

Some things to fix up if you want:

1) "bouncing from on foot to the other.." - Change 'on' to 'one'
2) "it hurt to loose your parents" - Change 'loose' to 'lose'
3) "that needs paid is the" - Add 'to be' between 'needs' and 'paid'
4) "I didnt have your either." - Either do 'I didn't have yours either' or 'I didn't have your name either.'
5) "a lot of each other than" - Change 'than' to 'then'

I definitely can't wait to read more!! Please update soon! :-)