 colorthecoastinretrospect 2009-09-07 . chapter 3yay for lemons .
ahahhahaha.
I want more of Indigo. and his smexiness.
sigh.
awesomechapter,hope you update again soon.
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 chng234 2009-09-06 . chapter 3wat happen between daimien n sofia? i wonder if they still love each other |
 Hide-and-Go-Seek 2009-09-06 . chapter 3at first i was like that dude and Sofia. But now i think it should be Damien and Sofia. They seem like a really good couple to me. Yeaa they hate eachother but i think the hate is all in their minds. I think they really really like eachother. Anywho! update sooner next time!
~*~HGS~*~ |
 colorthecoastinretrospect 2009-09-02 . chapter 2This is such a hysterical story.
It sucks it isnt getting as much reviews for how good it is.
I love Fee, i kinda feel bad that im not badass enough to threaten boys about castrating their nuts and still come out so feminine.
Hope you keep updating !
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 Dillibug 2009-08-10 . chapter 2this story sounds really great! lots of drama, a funny, vicious heroine and a hot new guy :) Can't wait to hear more |
 chng234 2009-08-07 . chapter 2i m a bit confused. did sofia cheat on daimien with his cousin? cos u mention it in this chapter or there is a mistake. |
 Jessiquie 2009-08-04 . chapter 1Hey got the Skow email and thought I'd check this story out. I realyl like the concept, not only is it original, is very much intriguing. Hope you update soon, can't wait to read more. |
 Semi-Precious Weapons 2009-08-03 . chapter 1She is positively perfect. I loved this first chapter, looks like the rest to come will be awesome. Can't wait to read more! |
 chng234 2009-08-02 . chapter 1who is daimien? |
 xbsrbb4ac2a 2009-08-01 . chapter 1Hehe, this story's unique. Not cliche, as far as I can tell. I'm enjoying it so far. Just a few nitpicky things that I spotted.
You spelled "Sofia" like that and like "Sophia". So I'm wondering which one it is. Nothing big. And also, there are a couple of places you lapse into past tense like, "...I asked him evenly, while tugging a brightly colored silk scarf around my neck" or "Then I remembered Peter mentioning dinner and groaned a second time." Also nothing big or distracting, but just pointing it out.
I hope you update soon! I'd really love to see more of this! |
 drooling blood 2009-08-01 . chapter 1i don't konw, i actually like sofia! then again, i'm a bit weird... kreacher was my favorite character in harry potter.
hm, good writing, THANKYOU for having no noticable grammar mistakes.
good job so far, i look foward to reading more.
~blood |
 squisheiy 2009-08-01 . chapter 1 I liked it(: Keep up the good work ! |