 LostInMe 2009-08-05 . chapter 1I like it! The rhymes are humorous, making the whole poem a very fun experience. Great job! |
 Isca 2009-08-04 . chapter 1"We are always glad to see them." Even though the speaker admits that most people 'tease' the 'snowbirds,' I like that the tone of this line is so honest - suggesting that the speaker really is happy to see the 'snowbirds' again in Arizona. My favourite line was "and Indians will whoop." I also like the Canadian geese part - my University campus is usually swarming with them :P. Keep up the good work. :) |
 Doxie Doll 2009-08-03 . chapter 1Ahh, the joys of tourist season. |
 Mirabella 2009-08-03 . chapter 1I like!
I like the part "And Indians will whoop", i can just picture it! Nicely done! |
 Sergeant Rock 2009-08-01 . chapter 1That was probably the best thing you've written yet, and something I can relate to. |