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fleur de l'est 2009-12-26 . chapter 1
Hahahah - 'To be greeted by Yuma / with much good huma' & 'swallar'. (though I had to google 'Yuma')

Well, that's nice. At least we know why people are glad to see them now ¬¬
bunnypopcorn 2009-12-08 . chapter 1
Haha, that made me crack up XD.
the prophet apathetic 2009-12-07 . chapter 1
Oh my. I would love to show this to my step-grandparents, because they are one of the flock that joins you in Yuma each year.

And I loved "good huma" haha, delightful!
Princess-anna57 2009-12-04 . chapter 1
Nice work! Obviously I don't know much about this, but now I know a bit more by reading this poem. The rhyming was neat too. Great! Write on.

~Anna~ ^_^
LostInMe 2009-08-05 . chapter 1
I like it! The rhymes are humorous, making the whole poem a very fun experience. Great job!
Isca 2009-08-04 . chapter 1
"We are always glad to see them." Even though the speaker admits that most people 'tease' the 'snowbirds,' I like that the tone of this line is so honest - suggesting that the speaker really is happy to see the 'snowbirds' again in Arizona. My favourite line was "and Indians will whoop." I also like the Canadian geese part - my University campus is usually swarming with them :P. Keep up the good work. :)
Doxie Doll 2009-08-03 . chapter 1
Ahh, the joys of tourist season.
Mirabella 2009-08-03 . chapter 1
I like!
I like the part "And Indians will whoop", i can just picture it! Nicely done!
J.A. Fletcher 2009-08-01 . chapter 1
That was probably the best thing you've written yet, and something I can relate to.
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