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Isca 2009-08-06 . chapter 1
"Mountain worms and lions." Striking imagery.

"She is green these days." I love the tone of this line - it's so witty.

"So turn your bedrooms into sexual kingdoms." Well, that was definitely a fun line to read. ;)
she smolders 2009-08-03 . chapter 1
Reading this was a lot of fun. Sometimes I forget that poetry doesn't always have to be so serious, or sad. I like the poems that make me smile. Take care.
star blanket river child 2009-08-03 . chapter 1
so turn your bedrooms
into sexual kingdoms

oh, i love that line.
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