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Reviews For: West Woods School of the UnNatural
vampbooklover3000 2009-11-26 . chapter 8
OMFG! THIS IS SO GOOD! I love mythology and stuff and honestly I havn't been on here in a while. but I LOVE your story! continue on PLEASE!
Soul Less Kitsune 2009-11-09 . chapter 8
sorry i havent said anything in a while, been busy. Anyway this is starting to get really good. Im guessing a fight is going to happen quite soon.
emzigale07 2009-11-09 . chapter 8
Happy bithday for saturday, this review is my presant to you, enjoy lol. Thanks for the mention and the dedication, it means a lot, I dont think I've ever had someone dedicate a whole chapter to just me, thank you. o0o0o, the Gemstones huh, sounds rather exclusive, I wonder who else is in there and what powers they have, it certinly sounds interesting and I wonder when Isabelle's telepathy and other unknown power will start to show. Question, is Mr. Dodger's power that he can sense other powers and that would be why he knew what Isabelle's were? I thought it might be and I just wanna check. Good job here, it was a good read and things are definetly getting interesting, looking forward to your next instalment, hope its soon :) x
AegisWinchester 2009-11-08 . chapter 8
Wow.. A little blunt with our heroines powers... lol
but umm, happy early birthday i guess?
ratcrazy16 2009-11-05 . chapter 7
OH I KNOW YOU ARE GOING TO MAKE THE NEXT CHAPTER SOON RIGHT? I CAN'T LIVE THAT LONG WITHOUT IT ITZ AMAZING YOU REALLY HAVE GOT TALLENT! now ready set go!
emzigale07 2009-10-08 . chapter 7
oh okay, sure I'll re read the chapters and get back into the jist of it, thanks for letting me know of the changes :) x
emzigale07 2009-10-07 . chapter 6
Aw yay, she kissed Ben, how very sweet. And now Ben is standing behind her at Westwoods? what? I do wonder whats happening here. Nice chapter here, you made good progress and it was nice to read. I did pick up on a few mistakes however 'As soon as I got into the care,' I think you mean 'car', just that and a few other little things, nothing to worry about really. Nice chapter here, looking forward to more. :) x
AegisWinchester 2009-09-08 . chapter 5
Hmm, Cliffy. I like the idea of the story but the chapters are a little short for me. Keep it up though! :)
meli101 2009-08-24 . chapter 1
that was interesting. what's the real reason they want to send her away?
emzigale07 2009-08-23 . chapter 5
Oh no, poor Isabelle! Hope shes okay, that was a lot to take in, its hardly surprising she ran off but no, now shes gunna
get hurt. Oh, by the way, sorry this review is late, I havent forgotten about you, I was just at my dads all weekend and I've only just gotten the chance to read your chapters. Whoop, so now we know what West Wood's school for the Unnaturals is, I wonder what other unnaturals there are there, if there are more than only Animagus' around there. There were no mistakes that I could see, so yay, well done! Great work so far, looking forward to your next update :) x
Soul Less Kitsune 2009-08-21 . chapter 4
Omg! that is evil! the suspense is going to kill me until i read the next chapter. (now i know what my readers feel when i wrote that last chapter in memorial to lost love)
emzigale07 2009-08-20 . chapter 3
Nice little chappy, nothing much really happened but we learned the full extent of Iz's powers, and she had a nice little moment with ben. It was a nice A to B chapter. My issue (not really and issue maybe more of a quiry) was as to the likely hood of the dragon bit, are mythical creatures on the list of what shes able to turn into? If so sure, its cool. Also, was she a small dragon? or else she might not have really fitted in the room. Anywho, I'll set away from the boring is-that-really-possible stuff (which really is a stupid thing to be considering since this is a fiction story, and its not real life, but yeah lol) and say that there were no writeing errors that I picked up on and your writeing style is pretty clear and easy to read. Good work hon, looking forward to your next chappy :) x
emzigale07 2009-08-09 . chapter 2
I like this, it has lots of potential and I'd like to see where you take this, however I think you should drag out the plot a little more, add in some suspence and dont rush things, leave your readers hungry for you next update with evil cliffies and so on, also, Lindseys brother and sister were possibly a little quick to believe that Is was a wolf, though that said I thought that the way you added a little disbelief was still pretty good. Your story greatly interests me and I wonder what other 'UnNaturals' there are, is everyone an Animagus or are there other people going to attend this school, do Is' parents know she is an Animagus, you mentioned that it was passed down bloodlines so maybe they know about it and hence the bording school. So many questions, but I shall have to wait until your next update,I spotted no mistakes and I am eager to see what happens next in your mos interesting story. Great work so far, I am looking forward to your next update :) x
Soul Less Kitsune 2009-08-09 . chapter 2
aw does isabelle like Ben? well i cant wait for more.
Hope for the Forests 2009-08-03 . chapter 1
Very interesting, I greatly enjoyed it and would love to read more! However, I have some suggestions to further improve your maginificent story. First, you greatly rushed the plot. Drag it out more give greater detail and dig deep into the characters emotions and feelings and definately make Isabelle's transformation much longer. The other thing is I would give the transformation a different feeling I mean tons of people have rea twilight and well that is exactly what happens to those werewolves. And one more thing... Lindsey is Isabelles best friend I love that you made her o accepting and concerned at the end but I would suggest putting a period of denial into your story in which Lindsey is very torn at first at the sight of her friend and then have her slowly grow to accept her and then have them go back to the house. Oh! the little sister loving the dog is very clever! Great job and I hope this helps :0]
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