Ironically I was listening to "I Hate Myself For Loving You" when reading the last part of the chapter

I really hope you pick this story back up. It's got a great feel to it and it's nice to see things from Jake's perspective. The funny thing is, he's truly so much like Aiden. Angst should be his middle name.

Hi

First of all i have to tell you that i enjoyed all of your stories very much and am looking forward for your new ones.

But as a german i have to tell you there a few mistakes in your german:

In german it's Das Café not Die Café. But you could use Die Kaffeebar or Die Kaffeestube (coffee parlor). In Bad luck Aiden called his teacher often Frau. This is like calling her woman. We call Frau Lehrerin (miss teacher) to our female teachers, but that is very polite.

lov this chapter keep up the great work,

waiting for more x

Great characters!

I hate going to parties like that XP. Maybe Brad was to drunk to notice that he actually kissed Jake. For some reason I really want Aiden and Jake to be best friends again.

i hope your happy, now i have to wash my pants because i pissed myself laughing at Chris's antics with Jake. Anyway i have mixed feelings about this story. On the one hand i love your writing and your humour, but on the other hand i don't like the main character, who i saw as i whiny, egotistical indecisive scumbag in Bad Luck (plus he denied Aiden his happiness with Zack for a while). Please continue wrting so i can fill the many hours i have free with literary enjoyment XD

this is pretty darn good so far, you certainly know how to make vivid characters. Unfortunately i think we all have a Leo somewhere in our lives. As for Bad Luck's length, i read it in a day, but that was all i did that day. Anyway i look foward to the rest of this and Bad Influence

Ok, no jokes, I was thinking to myself just last night as i took the dogs for a walk, "hmm i haven't seen any updates on those original stories I was reading... the ones by that girl who's also into Kingdom Hearts... the Bad luck spin off... hmm"

low and behold, i finally get online and you've updated. XD

hehe i'm actually glad that you made Chris so much older than he look, and older than Jacob. X3 and it entertains me so much how he just pushes Jocob's buttons like crazy.

great chapter! 8D

Yes! I'm so excited you updated, I'm really interested to see were this story goes. I feel a little bad for Jake, things don't seem to really be going his way, and it's understandable he's a bit upset with everything and Aiden. Can't wait for the next update!

Geez, Jake is really being an idiot, huh? But I guess it's part of the whole learning process for him. Also, Chris is amazing. Good job! I'm glad this story is back and up in running! Can't wait to see what happens next! Keep working hard, I'm rooting for you.

oh, Jake so needs to get over it. He's acting like such an ass, he really needs to get his shit together. Hanging up on Aiden, when he took the time to actually cal? Twice, mind you! Jake doesn't deserve him as a friend.

I'm so glad to see you're back, I've been missing the story. Woot! :)

I enjoyed Bad Luck and was glad to see a spin-off. I'm glad Jake got his own story here since his end of the story was left open a little.

Right before the first break you have "Yeah, I wouldn't wish it anybody." Is that supposed to be "Yeah, I wouldn't wish it on anybody." ?

I think I read the beginning of this one day since I recognize the whole "phone number exchange" scene. It makes a lot more sense to me now that I've read Bad Luck, though it was perfectly understandable without knowing to much about Bad Luck.

Love it so far, I hope you keep on writing!

“Where’s the key?”

“It’s under the bonsai tree,” he said. “The one with the stumpy branch.”

I thought about it for a second.

“Wait… that’s inside,” I told him, blinking. He just grinned.

- ha :) Trust Leo!