Oh my goodness! I absolutelty LOVE this story. The setting and atmosphere is wonderful! And the way you've used the first persona is excellent! =) I can really feel for the poor princess.

This story has made me want to start writing again! ^^

Hm...I think the only thing this story is lacking so far is sufficient description of the surroundings of the protagonist.

Wow, Nice chapter! :)

excellent writing style =)