again, been there, felt all that! your description is fantasmical and i like it a lot! (and glad to see you listen to paramore...i love their stuff! :) keep up the great writing! :)

paramore

song. a beautiful one at that. your words are so real, so lyrical, so unique.

I liked the repetition in the first bit. It gave more emphasis to the important parts, I think. The second bit had a different feeling to it, and I really liked it. The last line in particular I liked the best.