This is a really sweet story about ordinary life. You don't find much of these out there. What's even better is that you take something so mundane and ordinary and turn it into something interesting and attention grabbing. That's quite a talent you have, something not many people do.

A lot of stories sell themselves with a lot of action and highly exaggerated stuff and drama and whatever, but yours is just simple, mundane, yet very enthralling. Just awesome. Plain awesome, as simple as that.

me hearts the last line like.. like.. like... like hot chocolate on a cold day.

me heart yo' supafly stories. heehee