This/these erratic poem(s) wrapped me inside of their acquiescent simplicity right from the start. I thought it was truly ingenious, how you tore words apart to form the end of each line. How wonderful, this must have taken you quite awhile! If not, then I must commend you on your talent. You must have some knack for improvisation...?

woa these are good! every line is beautifully rhyme, and the meaning are so true! i can see that you are very good in your choice of words, able to manipulate them! really good one! love all of them, especially the 6th!