Wow. There's definitely something special about this poem. The baby deer legs and the lung-drawer parts were my favourites (not to mention the tree seed ending). This is like a breath of fresh air; how refreshing! :)

this one really has a lot
going for it; wish i knew
what the ca1881 refers to,
but that's okay. those
folded spindly deer legs
are so great; well, it all
is, the juxtaposed tree
seeds (tree seeds!) and
ash: wonderful. darn,
one of those i wish i'd
written. nice work.