ahh, that was really sweet ^^ really talks a lot about loneliness and kindness. it gives you the a nice 'boost' =P. stories that do that are the best; no matter how bad it gets stories like this can show how much more there is to life.

~zero

Aww :) What a sweet story! This is exactly the sort of heart warming story I really needed to read right now. You totally just lifted my day. Thank you!

that was so cute... and sad... she reminds me of my best friend.

and that's all i can say

Wow... What to say. This is REALLY good. It keeps you hooked the whole time, and evolves at the perfect pace. It's a little predictable (once John arrives), but what romance isn't, lol. The moment you start reading you know that even if you are sure of what will happen in the end, the journey there is what keeps you attracted to the story the WHOLE way. The blog entries are a good way to see exactly what the characters are thinking, and are a good "theme" that makes the story unique and creative. They are spaced very nicely throughout the story, and give you a perfect little breather from the action. Overall, if you could rate stories, I'd give it a ten out of ten. These are the type of stories I love to read, and I wish I could write. Great job.

By the way, I checked out your profile and noticed that you don't have anything else in the Romance category :( You are really very good at it, and I would definitely read anything else you write in this category (my favorite section, besides Anime/Manga on Fanfic), no matter how long it is :) Anyway, I've said enough. Again, this was flawless.

I really enjoyed your story. Even cried a little in the end. Thanks for sharing. Joan.

Awe. That really was a beautiful story.

I really enjoyed this so much. You captured Kerry's loneliness really well, she finding friendship at a grave. John, a kind and gentle man finally gives Kerry what she was looking for.

Excellent

:)

This was pretty good! Kinda long...but overall it was an interesting storyline.
:D

This story was beautiful. You write with such skill and subtlety - I love how even the seemingly insignificant details, like the trash on the lawn, become important to the development of the story and your characters. You struck the right balance of loneliness and desperation with a sense of hope and happiness toward the end. Congratulations on writing something truly beautiful.