Short, but simply lovely. You can convey so much in so few words! It's really great! Thanks for reviewing by the way. :)

Aww, pretty :)

I loved the last line, 'an everlasting beauty.'

It said alot and its only three words. Great job, cant wait to read more.

-Sapphire

p.s. Thank you for reviewing my poetry and sorry for taking so long to get back to you!

I like the idea of poetry being able to write itself :) That's how I write my poems and stories.

Nice metaphor.

fleur

PS It should be 'its own' not 'it's own' "