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Reviews For: Adventures in the World of Dating
PoptartsAndConfusedHearts 2009-09-10 . chapter 1
This is a awesome story! I really enjoyed it.
OhMsYumi 2009-08-23 . chapter 1
Wonderful chapter. I loved Cass' perspective. She sounds like an amazing character indeed.
Very enjoyable to read. Do continue!
jesxcore 2009-08-23 . chapter 1
I really liked this chapter. I think the biggest critique I have is just to re-read chapters to edit out typos and things before you post the story.
I love the honesty of your character, and how she reacts to things and what she tells herself is really realistic. It is a very relatable character. Keep up the good work!
RinstarElite 2009-08-13 . chapter 1
Great Story. Do everybody a favor and continue
seeking stardom 2009-08-07 . chapter 1
Love it!Update a.s.a.p!

Love,

~Aly
shareeg 2009-08-06 . chapter 1
We as woman question ourselves like this and we call our friends. this sounds like my friend vela! I will have her read it, but really its all of us I think this is very good- I have questions is this the story of her dating life or will it be like a self help story?

It's clever, fun and fresh and very interesting! I would love to read a scene with her on an actual date that would be quite interesting. I have to read a little more to really be able to say more about it, so as soon as you update let me know, I have enjoyed this plenty so far!
Serafina Claremond 2009-08-06 . chapter 1
Hello there. Well, I really like the chapter and I admire the way you write. The narrating is spectacular.
I can't wait to read more. x)

~Serafina
Frozen.by.Sloth 2009-08-06 . chapter 1
Hey, I loved this. I liked both the maturity of the writing and the simple yet informative way with which you narrate. I can't wait to see more, I already have full confidence in the story. Well, the hopeful sort, at least.

Good luck, keep writing, and thanks for sharing. :)

Enjoy by the way
XxShokixX 2009-08-06 . chapter 1
Ooh I like :3
Cass(ie?) seems like a strong character, despite the whole breakdown thing...
I love the way you described her at the start, I can already tell she's not going to be a Mary-Sue like countless other female characters on FictionPress.
Can't wait to read more, update soon please :D
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