Great poem. Keep up the good work. God Bless!

exellent! I really like this. The words sound great together.

That's really good. It may not jump off the page with awesomeness, but it's a solid poem. If there is no God, then why does anything matter? If I didn't have my faith, I couldn't imagine what my life would be like, and I don't think I want to know.

I really like it! I can totally see what angle you're comming at and I like the way the words sounded good together.

i like this. very, very true(and i hope its Jesus we're talking about here x) rather good for something thats not your best lol.

great work.

you're right, people need something to believe in.

it's a very powerful and honest poem, the imagery is great.