I saw this on the Rating Junction and expected something mushy and teen angst-y, but this really touched me.

Your flow and style are impeccable, and the raw emotion was evident throughout the entire piece. Short as it was, the message was clear.

I just don't know how to explain how much I like this.

-Tally (of TMB)

Cool I love it

It sounds like you've been hurt or are afraid to take a chance thinking that you will be hurt. On the flip side to this story, love can be a wonderful thing if you let it just don't set your expectations too high and go with the flow you will be amazed at what will happen.

As others have said, I am sure this was probably written from experience. It's very well done, and you can feel the intensity it is giving off. I may not have been through the exact things you have, but I've been in a "messy" type of love before, and I have felt those feelings. So, from experience I can say that it would be hard to make this any better, and it's as clear as can be. Great job.

Aww, I'm reviewing. I liked the title and this has a simple feel to it, but is grounded in reality and very relate-able feelings. Nicely done.

Aw, is this written from experience? If not, you were really convincing. I like your style of writing because you put so much feeling into this.

:)

This is really good&&deep[:i like it. I really like this part:

One day you'll realize what it is you lost. Who it is you let go.

That's what everyone tells me anyway.

Anyhoo,good job[:

Very nice. I really enjoyed it.