I really enjoyed reading this. I like that you left it up to the reader to determine whether they wanted to deem Charlie Redding a 'madman' because he was a criminal or whether they wanted to feel sorry for him because he was a sorrowful, lonely "wind-man." Keep up the good work. :)

Intersting narration. The way the narrator singled himself out as a solid entity made me wonder who he was. Was he this "wind-man" that you mentioned? I was a bit unsure, but still, the curiosity drove me on.

I also like the way you let this character unfold slowly. First, jsut being a corpse, I felt sorry for him, but then when you indtroduced who he really was, I began to hate him. You have a lot of control over your audience for such a short piece.

~Sparkles from the Review Marathon (link in profile)