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ireadtoomanybooks 2009-11-27 . chapter 6
Love it :D Silly, but cute!
momochan123 2009-10-28 . chapter 5
Didnt feel like login in but i just had to comment XD SO FUNNY DEVIL KEIKO-CHAN CURSE IS OVA! or is it o...o
momochan123 2009-10-28 . chapter 1
Lmfao XD i litterally jerked out ma chair at teh proposal rejection and yelled PWNED lol poor poor boy
Kaiyako Kagami 2009-09-05 . chapter 4
Hey!

ZOMG. I'm sorry I'm always reviewing so late! I loved the chapter, hahaha, I was laughing so hard when Nakamura's all like "I like you" and Arai is like "No you don't." ahahaha *wipes tear from eye* I don't think I've ever heard that sort of reaction from someone before. *Smiles*

I love how their relationship is growing and I also love how Nakamura is so candid about his feelings, saying things like "I see you in clouds" that's totally cute, I mean it's funny but I find it more cute :]

MUWAHAHAHA. Nori monster~

Nakamura would make the best house wife ever *hires him on the spot* :P

OMG. Why is Nakamura going to jump off the roof?! NO!

Looking forward to the next chapter~ ^^
-Kaiyako Kagami
Kaiyako Kagami 2009-08-25 . chapter 3
Hey!

I feel I should mention that you might want to go back over your story and add like bold or italics or something. Some parts (like the dream) are a bit confusing. :]

-“That’s not true!” Tanaka scoffed. “You have to consider his feelings too you know.” Inoue said.
~Hit return after Tanaka is done speaking

-“Yall tricked me!” Nakamura pouted. “I don’t want to talk about Arai-san.”
~“Ya'll tricked me!” Nakamura pouted. “I don’t want to talk about Arai-san.”

-“Yall are both Keiko-chan!”
~"Ya'll"

-“Yall are just too cruel.”
~"Ya'll"

I love this chapter! Again, it's so funny~ I love the co-workers and how they all have different personalities and ideas even though they seem to agree on certain things.
It's like watching a movie, and very refreshing to read :] Good job~ I really enjoyed it!
I'm looking forward to what you have up your sleeve next time :P
:D

-Kaiyako Kagami
Miss Four 2009-08-22 . chapter 1
(points to self, with an empty expression on her face) But...I like soccer and video games...
And, what!? This is insane, but I love it! It reminds me of "Gravitation" for some odd reason!
I love Nori's entire confession. It reminds me of so many yaoi/shonen-ai, it's ridiculous.
Oh, and, before I run off, I spotted a grammar mistake. At one point, you write "Your" when it's supposed to be "You're".
And away we go!
Kaiyako Kagami 2009-08-19 . chapter 2
Hey~!

I'm so sorry about the late review, I got kind of sick and I was bedridden :[
Ha-ha, anyway: I love this chapter!
It's DAMN funny :P
Hahaha, I totally love Arai and Nakamura, they are so funny to read about :P
The whole departments really full of interesting characters, they're all so different from each other!
I can't wait to see how they cuss Nakamura out *evil laugh*
Hahaha AMAZING WORK~!

-Kai
Kaiyako Kagami 2009-08-09 . chapter 1
Hahahahahah!
OMG, you have to write more!
This is so freakin' terrific: I was laughing so hard I almost had tears in my eyes :P
KEEP IT UP! I'M LOOKING FORWARD TO IT!
-Kaiyako K.
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